My Omega Doctor

low score due the locked chapters after chapter 5, don't know if the author is greedy or something else, but having chaps locked so early on makes keeping up with story hard on a .daily basis, at max one can get 3 free passes, and there are other worth it books that get this passes, I can't possibly invest all only in this book just so I can have enough pleasure reading this chapter.

When I usually read amazing works I usually review saying as such but for some reason, every time I read this I just forget so my bad. If I was to compare this to your other works I'd definitely say this is by far the best, oh and btw you p*ssed me off at the end of your fanfic by saying rose and chloe died. Anyways your writing has only gotten better from what it was and even then it was amazing, again my only critique is the time you upload, if you were a bit worse at writing I wouldn't care but your just to d*mn good.

As the Author I shamelessly give myself a full 5star review?. But I hope to so more stars so I will work hard to the best of my abilities to give the best experience. CIAO!!

Emerson Cole is a transmigrator with the ability to fuse attributes and elemental fragments, most commonly by eating mutated beasts.While it starts off with Cole hunting in the forest, it doesn’t take long for Cole go from hunting beasts in the forest to just buying beast meat that others have hunted and sold. And it’s kind of nonsensical, because he needs to take care of his sister but is barely getting by because he’s spending thousands a day buying beast meat instead of hunting it himself. The characters are not very likeable. Cole is very boring. He’s your typical cold and unfeeling protagonist. His sister is a beauty that’s flawless and super nice with no unique traits at all. Then there’s a bratty and obnoxious princess and arrogant, troublemaking nobles to round out the cliche cast of characters.Still, it’s not the worst I’ve read on here and there has been some action even outside of the forest so I’ll keep reading.

This is a review of the first chapter.  The main character is Li Yu who was orphaned at age 11.  To avoid going into the army Li Yu has been working as a hunter to feed and shelter himself and his younger brother.  The world he lives in has both mortals and immortal cultivators.  During one hunting trip, he finds a gem inside his prey.  Soon after a mysterious voice keeps asking him to join a cultivation chat group.  The story is written with a sense of humor.

This story does have potential. But there are some problems that I find. If the author reads these hopefully he can answer some of my question that I have. For the record I am caught up to the latest chapter and will continue  reading for sure. For the Writing Quality theres alot of grammatical errors and misspelled words that do need to be fixed. English might not be their first language and that's totally cool but theres alot that need to be updated. Story Development is interesting  but it feels like a train with no brakes. Very fast paced. This isn't a bad thing but keep in mind that your Character Development bbn and World Building could suffer from the pace your setting. You arent even 100 Chapters in and it feels like he already God level. I believe the story would benefit  more if there more time spent on him training his and other powers so we understand everyone's power level. This goes hand in hand with Character Design. Everyone feels flat. Secrecy is good but we know next to nothing about the MCs friend or Best Friend. Nor do we know why William is the way he is. Emma seems to be the classic soft hearted healer. She, in my opinion could be more of a personality   or just different. Alice is also very flat so far. Is she suppose to be a companion? is she just a glorified assistant? I have a feeling that she could be so much more, such as taking the initiative and using her animal forms. The MC himself also need a bit more design. Especially when is comes to his background and the World background in general. What happened to his parents and family? What is his motivation to obtain power? What about him makes him be worthy to obtain a Pure Soul? Not to mention this Acedemy. Is it special? How is the MC able to go to a Acedemy even though hes an orphan? The back ground need a lot more fleshing out. Such as the the Countries on Earth. What is the Federation? What's the big deal about the 5 Great Families? What's society and the Government like? What role does the Association play in the Government? Where is the setting of the story? US? Europe? Asia? Or because of how the Calamities changed the landscape, is there even any old Governments left? I feel like so far that the story is sprinting on and not pausing the look at the scenery.