Monster Chef Shun

so i wrote this review to get free pass and i need to write 140 characters so im gonna make this long and im so close i have nothing to talk about

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This **** is trash Mc wanna hide his personality when The previous Mc already forgot his memory everyone knows this whats the point in hiding it an then you got him hiding that he could do magic for no reason at all an then another turn off is wanting to make a portal to bring men to that world so dumb such a beta MC thats retarded so dumb most the time its just complaints about dumb stuff how to satisfy the world of woman like who cares you just woke up an now wanna take the frustrations of all woman  pullin a naruto GARBAGE

Very good start. Needs more showbiz novels with less overt racism please. Hope this gets picked up soon. Wonder what's next for him.      

The story idea of needing of using a pay-to-play system is interesting. Unfortunately most of the sayings and catchphrases use so much of a specific cultures idioms that the translation is garbled on actions, thoughts and descriptions of various things. The mc is so obnoxious that it's hard to find him interesting. With a some solid assistance and some rewriting in other areas it would become a more passable read.

The story started off amazing with great characters and storyline up until the "4 years later" part. After this it felt a little like the writer wanted to end the story quickly or didn't know what else to write. There are quite a few spelling errors but you can still read it easily.