Mobile Suit Gundam: Twilight Axis

not bad good writing, it's just weirdly heavy with all the secondary knowledge, I find myself just skipping the unending descriptions on things and especially the politics and schemes, they just kinda happen by front loading copious amounts of exposition and expecting people to follow along with the convoluted nonsense, also I think you went to big to quickly introducing universe level concepts before he barely steps out of his first sect is a good way to burn yourself out and the readers, overall meh I read it a little at a time when other novels are updating

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Aaa, this story is so great I don't even know where to start. The whole thing is sweet and touching and packed full of lively, vibrant characters and intertwined stories. Once I started reading I ended up skipping the ongoing stories I read just so I could binge on this one. A fantastic piece of art!

this is exciting and fun to read its awesome

Probably one of my favorites on here, but in later chapters it gets extremely drawn out. Like 6 chapters of doing the business back to back to back then followed by a chapter or 2 of story movement followed by individual dates for another several chapters. I need storyline movement to keep me interested.

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