Not wanting to remain a NEET, 30 years old Arata decided to join a private military and security company. While having fun during the training and getting good scores, soon he has to face a real war.
Cerita yang sangat menarik dan pekerjaan MC juga sangat menarik tapi ending ceritanya terlalu cepat seperti di paksakan untuk tamat padahal cerita sebelumnya masih sangat menarik.
Chapters are in badly need of proof readingHow webnovel novels have degenerated.................awdqwqrhirheifshfsdifbsifhsofoiw;egfio;wheoifio;ahef;ioahef
Overall, quite good; Pacing is great, and explanations of concepts doesn't seem overloaded. More characters would be nice, though, and maybe more fight scenes (if that's what you would like to go for). Also, really solid update schedule!Keep up the good work.
You have got a kind of imagination that I can ever not imagine. it is good.' to my thinking, you should work on your cover nothing else. I have started reading the novel by its synopsis will go ahead.
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Hey, got to say that this is a good novel. However, I noticed that there are some inconsistency. For example, the MC contradicting himself (chapter 24). Another example, MC's first meeting with the novel's original MC. The interaction ended awkwardly and were a bit abrupt with the MC's response. Other than a few bits and nitpicking those, the overall story is interesting and have a sense of story flow. Also, a last bit of advice to improve the story is by making a story map. The story map doesn't need to be fully or well made, the story map must be able to guide the story direction. That's it for this review.
