The pacing of the story is unrealistic and rushed. And the main character feels undervelop and lacks personality.When I first saw that this novel was about hunter x hunter I was realy excited, however i quickly realized that my excitement was fir nothing. By combining a epic manga and similarly epic novel it only causes the novel to be bloated by surplus of concepts. Ultimately this does not feel like a hunter x hunter novel, but instead reads as your standard broken system cultivator novel.