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I love your writing style, it's top-notch

I previously gave 3 stars but then I thought about it, why be stingy it's a fun novel and maybe more ppl will notice if it goes higher, didn't know how to delete the previous review so there u go

Great story,  great plot, great beauty, it is just too much sexual content which I rarely seen. So at least ADD Tage R16+ (It is mature content so people know) can’t wait for the next chapter.

Ngl, this is what i wanted! I love the story and especially the mc, Etc. I would love to see more of the nocel and yeah. I support ya!!! Looking forward to see more.

Looks like this has a better translation than the other reviews indicate. Not sure if something changed since they left their reviews or what. Overall, it seems like a pretty good story. I find the MC to be really entertaining. Yes, there is a system, but I think the MC's personality so far at least makes it interesting. Same with many of the other characters especially the sect leader.

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