Knock Knock - Who Is There?

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It is an okay story for sure. It is still super early on but every chapter seems to get better. I didn't have a moment that I hated, but I did have several that I found enjoyable. Honestly I feel like you either like it or you don't?

I enjoyed the book a lot. Even if the protagonist comes off as rude and proud, but I'm guessing the author was going for that when he was talking in his head.Overall it's a good book. Personally I feel that there are some things that shouldn't be written so much. It takes away the mystery. Keep writing author.

The number of angry 80-year-olds is much lower than the number of angry under 30-year-olds.In all theory, a 418-year-old should be a very patient person.Likewise, if you spend 400 years in "hell" and you lean on something that you don't have, and which gradually becomes a mirage, a distant memory (Like a family) you become crazy to a fairly high speed.I always thought that the novel where the goal of the mc was something passive (here "to protect his family") the novel could only be boring.Just watch all the best anime, imagine if naruto didn't want to be Hokage, if Gon (HxH) didn't want to find his father, if Songoku didn't want to fight powerful opponents, if Light didn't want to kill all the criminals...A goal is at least half of a character, if he doesn't have one then it's a half empty character.In short, let's talk more concrete, the main character could be interesting if he had the will to do something.The world is basic and nothing special.The secondary characters are at least as boring as the protagonist.the writing quality is rather good if we forget the fact that the author does not proofread.the rhythm of the chapters is good.

Translation quality is my biggest issue. The Translation keeps getting worse with every chapter and the word choices made by the Translator are awful. For example, the Translator uses Blood level instead of health and Strength level instead of stamina. This is just one of the few examples. This happens throughout the novel with it getting worse as it goes on.

You can immediately tell that this is one of those stories that will keep you engaged until the end. I was really surprised at the quality for web novels but this one changed my mind and ill look into other stories now as well.