Kingdom of Rebirth

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it would  be really cool I you us the song  strawberry cake by xdinary heroes  the have the same theme your going  and the chapter it can be about he bad ex girlfriend who found out he was becoming famous and then he released that song

seems pretty good with the whole 3 chapters I've read

What the actual frick was the ending? THE most rushed ending I have ever read. it's basically about 4/5's of the way through the story arc and it just wraps its self up in about 5 chapters. It's like the author had 15 minutes to live and wanted his book done before he died. Other than the story being garbage the characters are painfully mediocre and become cardboard cutouts about halfway through. The world building is a huge missed opportunity as to begin with it has a great premise but utterly fails to be unique or interesting and falls into the trap of generic "lower level world -> higher level world -> even higher level world".The translation quality is pretty great for this website, which while not saying very much, is nice. With the book being complete the stability of updates is automatically perfect.Translation quality: 8/10Stability of Updates: 10/10Story Development: 1/10Character Design: 2/10World Background: 3/10Overall: 4.8/10 (Dragged up heavily by Stability of Updates and Translation Quality)I wouldn't recommend. What a shame.

Update? Please??? Author, you come back here and give us more awesome content or I will explode!

"Shut up Punya... I know everything. I've seen the care and love you both share... My only request is please stay loyal to him atleast... He loves you...." said Prakruth.