Now my explanation for the 4 starts instead of the 5 stars I know it deserves: The breaking off the scenes in the chapter makes it so hard to enjoy your story. It's very distracting, I would strongly advise you to edit that also the typos and grammar mistakes.
"You will wake-up with a giant headache, but that is the last of my problems." Pò muttered pleased to herself as she left the same way she got in so to bask in the moonlight of yet another cloudless night.
