Just one more level

Great start and very interesting so far. Hoping for regular updates. Just don't stop writing the story. I am sure you will become professional author...?

I believe this story has amazing potential and just from the little I read so far have come to really enjoy it and am looking forward to more updates

interesting so far, but author pay to much atention to the comments up to the point of skipping chapter in a rant, so is to inmature, is very consistent with his relases, there is more need of world background, but is undestable as the history is in his beginings.

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While it is an okay story this book just has too many things wrong with it to be amazing. First is that this book does not do any explaining of the setting or give the characters backgrounds. While I know this is a common thing on this site but there are just a lot of grammar mistakes in it too. The story just progresses too fast it doesn't stay on a topic it just goes through story lines extremely fast. Would not recommend.

Turning back to see Iselin messing with Niklas' necklace, Hakon sighed at the ease in which the girl had taken a liking to the older man. He had been trying to instill a sense of danger and suspicion into the child that should have been second nature to Iselin given her upbringing, but she often and easily forgot his lessons whenever she was wandering the streets on her own.