Invictus: Memoirs of an otherworlder on a mission

From chapter 1 to like 100 this is a really amazing story but after that it goes down hill professional players who play for money make newbie mistakes mc and those near him repeat their same mistake that they made in say early chapters overall its a meh story it just feels like the author gave up at some point and decided to make characters lose brain cells for convenience sake and plot it’s annoying and i mean to the point of i feel frustrated irl

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TAGS.........-Male MC-Smart MC-Overpowered MC-System-Weak To Strong-Transport To Other Worlds-Kingdom Building-Unique Cultivation Method-Cheat-Loyal Subordinates-Teacher-Magic And Swords-Sudden Strength Gain-Money Grubber

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Keep the good work author hope you dont drop this..From the biggest fan of the velnerable old mo.Hahahahahahaha. Hope the author gave the old mo character standing up again like in the volume 1.

what i enjoyed was the world creation and the events that are playing out to a certain point. The author has a nice writing style that is vey simple and clean. There is a lot of potential to the story. whever it goes, good luck author.