In Love with My Fiance's Enemy

I really love this novel. I have tried to find a good cultivation vrmmorpg novel before and I have never actually come across one.The main character is perfect in my opinion. He is just the right amount of naive and I love it. For me a naive main can get annoying very quickly but not Yuan. He isn’t an idiot but there are times where he just doesn’t totally understand concepts that are obvious to others especially the NPCs in the game. Which for me adds a nice touch to his character that I am enjoying and one of the biggest things I love about this story.One thing that I can hardly wait for, at the time of this review, is when his sister will enter the game and be able to play with him. It will be very interesting to see how she will react to who he is in the game.The world right now seems like a normal cultivation world in the game. I gave five stars for it just because I don’t mind that kinda thing and I am sure this author will enhance it and make it much better as they have done for their other novel. Also, while the pacing might seem a little fast I quite enjoy the speed it is going at. There are many novels that I can’t enjoy because things just seem to drag on but not in this story and I truly enjoy not having to trudge through multiple chapters that are only there to be around to pad the word count.  It isn’t like that in this story and it is another one of my favorite things about it.The writing quality is pretty self explanatory in that it is well done and I haven’t been jarred out of my resding by spelling mistakes or bad grammar. I never expected there to be any problems from this author so it wasn’t truly a surprise for it to also be given five stars. At this time it is a little bit of a wait and see on the update stability but I gave five stars for it in the true hope that the author will give us consistent updates to this wonderful story.In conclusion thanks foe an amazing story and I hope more people read it.

Story great from the start gives minimum background of the world and the character get a great character development as the story progresses. Only draw back is that after some 300 chapters you can't read the novel as it's full of grammatical error as it useless as we can't get the content of the story from that. Other than that it's a good story.

Im honestly surprised this got on trial reads, the writing styles bland and the story is full and full of cliches with under average plots and slow developments, not surprised this wasnt chosen

She took my hand and helped herself up and after walking on the path we made it to the first flat area on the mountain. The mountain had three layers of flat land and in those layers were where the plants that me and Sven grew were.

"Ania what's bothering you?"

"We have names you know, I am Alfred, that young man over there is Kyle, and the princess's name is Maya. Now that you know our names why don't you tell us yours" Alfred spoke calmly.