The author has a tendency to use his words wisely which is very good.Has an excellent way to describe things, and the plot is good.But, the author must improve his punctuation.The author sometimes just throws in facts that are not true, it might be for comedic relief but sometimes it is not correct to misguide people.The thing that the author has no knowledge of is the usage of figures of speeches.It does make it funny tho.. but it's just wrong. If you don't know what kind of figure you are using, you can just be silent and not just throw in some random figures.The rest is good, keep up the work author.