His Salvation

126 chapters 9-10-23

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After reading a couple chapters I can say it’s not bad per se but the author can work a little more on the development through chapters. Some events are split between multiple chapters and it feels weird to read the same thing again with just small details added to separate them. Basically just needs better oraganization when writing.

but Uchiha Madara had a serious face and with great determination, he only worried about taking the next step without falling to the ground.

After the party serious training started involving everyone in the guild even some dragon gods came to assist like igneel's soon ignia, they stopped using the machine and started hand to hand combats.

...and a hot lava wave surge out on his body na nagpatunaw sa tuhod ni Joshua.