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I’m here to say this got removed from the voting pool on the Que of books and I don’t see updates I’m sad it got removed today :(Is this story dropped forever???? someone please steal this and write your own I’ll drop $$$$

I do not why some think that this is not good or it's the same to the other novel.. because for me... it's still unique and fun to read. Love the twins, there interaction and the family love. So for me, this is good story. Please update more and continue. Thank you for the good novel. ?

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A poorly written good story.There are too many grammar and present/past tense mistakes. Sometimes the phrase won't have any meaning and you'll have to try to guess what the author meant.As for the story he usually rushes with the story part but is really slow and descriptive with the crafting part, which some might like and other might think is tecnobabble (like me).Nevertheless, these rushed parts are still interesting and coupled with the MC upgrade ability, made for a nice story. The author should cut a little on the crafting part and improve more the plot with interesting events in the sect with other people or ****** more adventures.You should also add more challenge and stick to your power ranks. The MC wins too easily and too over his own level. Him as a rank 1 killing rank 19 is quite ridiculous and undermines your own system.Also there are some really stupid plot devices like Strong Cultivators not interfering in an attack on the city by bandits because it's an attack made by the young generation and they don't want to get involved because of pride, the old can't fight the young or something. I facepalmed when I read this and almost dropped.

My personal opinion about your novel is that I really like it because the novel tells about the characters of gods, wizards, dragons, vampires, wolves, what's more, I like the Greek god the most, and this novel has a mystery and a plot that is not clichéd and boring, the point is this my favorite novelI love your novels, hope you keep releasing chapters and don't stop them, and good luck to you writers.greetings from me Indonesia :)