Guia

author of super gene , lol aint gonna even bother . sg was total waste of my useless time and can probably guess how this will turn out with kind of **** synopsis

every value is messed up, names are changed, chapter 9 is the 8th one. low quality in every way, dont loose your time if you are not trully desesperate to read something.

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Great stuff, light read, I dont really understand the complains that is generic or similar to budhas palm novel. Who cares. I really liked budhas palm sign In and seeing the idea developed in a different way is great.

The writing is decent, the updates seem consistent, story development is alright and there are decent characters. The world building also seems OK. Honestly if you like some what JP-anime vibe story then give it ago. There is nothing that seems wrong, but the character of the MC and the side characters were rather annoying often. Plus the whole thing about everyone keeping things from him isn't my cup of tea and him not remembering things after major events. Plus the whole chapter of talking to himself about how he will not do something only for him to that exact thing at the end was annoying as well along with half of his self talk. All in all, if you are a fan of the genre give it a read and decide for yourself, it has its upsides, it wasn't my cup of tea, but it could be yours.

It is a good story with some cliche parts, like every fantasy story, but it feels like there are many unnecessary parts and some conversations that are forced or unnecessary or dragged out.Overall I like the story and the slow development, but the conversations between characters doesn't feel smooth for me (don´t know how to describe it), but I will stick around and see how it turns out!Good luck!