Horrible Grammar though readable, so 2 starsstability of updates 4 pointsstory: sounds actually quite interesting but its the generic revenge storyv 4 stars for potentialcharacter design: nothing special might get better later on but for now 3 starsworld background: i don't know.i've only read to chapter 5 before i could'nt take the grammar anymore so I'm assuming it's average. 3 starsi have no idea how somebody could give this 5 stars. I gave it 3.2 stars and thats me being generous. The grammar alone would make 5 stars impossible, the weird analogies make it even harder "the clans hid, like a snake hides its legs".