Rhapsody, many parts coming together to form an unexpected yet cohesive whole. A painter a thrill-seeker and a thinker. The lives they touch. The actions they take. The legacy they build.
Writing my first ever review for a book at Webnovel.To keep it short this novel made me as hooked as ISSTH by ErGen to the point that I spent money to catch up and but privilege.I am usually shy, but I felt maybe to you the person who bothers reading reviews I can give you a very small personal checklist that this novel completely covered for me.1. Char development is fantastic..not just for MC but all characters that make appearances, as they are relevant to a good degree to the overall plot.2.The love interests are not flooding the story which I appreciate ( although I wish we have atleast a couple more).I don't like novels which have MC interacting with 12 girls whom I don't care enough about later point in time as they don't do enough for the overall plot or are just too repetitive in what they do.3.World building is exceptional.. without spoiling too much for new readers I wanna say you are in for a treat there is a lot author has already planned out and teases us occasionally about the Big guns in this martial universe that he has created.I am so excited about that.4.MC has a good head over his shoulders and I like that he is not over the top smart and he has room to get stronger and be better too.Would love to see a side of him when he can make a blunder by mistake but that's just me.Over all I am happy.5.Story is at a very good pace and I wasn't able it put it down since I started.There are so many things I probably missed mentioning but for me personally it's my top 3 novels of all time so far and gives me ISSTH VIBES ( please note I am not saying it's a copy or similar just the way it made me feel as a reader and kept me hooked)Zeus you are writing great stuff take care of your health while you keep making high quality chapters for us fans :).Looking forward to the Saga of Shun Long
This story uses so much detail in describing the world within it. The author seems to be a pro at building plot points and proper bases for building up the story. When I read this book, I can see the world vividly as if I’m really there. The earlier chapters give us a bit of knowledge as to the main character’s life, letting us sympathize with him. It describes the quests and the app itself in relatable terms, making it easy to understand it. The leveling system and functions work like a person gaining social status in the Mid-Evil Renaissance. There’s so much potential here! You’re bound to love this book! I guaranteeufffc!
It's a good story overall, but the main character is flat. The mc is only interested in the money and doing as little work as possible. How can you get attached to a character who has no ambitions...?
OK first of look like it’s gonna start getting really good but the character development return it to complete retard and then every elder in this entire story is complete trash. I don’t know if the author has a problem with the elders, but he turned them all into retards, so I’m done this is not good.
