Fallout: Survival - Reviews

"I understand your concern, of course. And shall only share this with the others who need to know of it. Like Hoshendanggir, and the other Craft Masters, who might need your help to deal with Abyssal Creatures in the near future. And to protect their people as they go about their tasks."

"Lahat nang bampira Summer ay may kanya-kanyang natatanging kapangyarihan. At si Walts, kaya n'yang pasukin ang pag-iisip ng isang tao at pasunurin sa kung ano man ang gusto n'ya gamit lang ang isip.

Impressed he continued his tour.  This place was amazing. 'Could I live here?' He wondered. It would be much better than staying in the compound, and if his family, they would be protected from any retaliation from those that backed Banner.  Having seen most things he decided to try to find the main terminal that seemed necessary for most functions.

Then… Who was I with yesterday…? It's faint, but I still feel the tingling pain in my belly. I can still remember the sensation, perfectly. His touches and his kisses. I can remember them all well enough.

yes again I said I am the culprit

"Sir, Every single ANBU we send after the boy ended up in hospital, and they all said There was this bone-chilling ice blizzard and one shadow of a man who called himself as the Holder of The will of Flenjord

"Ah... Yes, Nice to meet you "

"Aunty Ada says I should make this today for her, so I decided to splurge."

     Someone comes from the door that was closed tightly. That someone is sitting in front me. "So, Carl."

very good?? a great story to read. very good

Hello, honest review. The concept and plot is good, as well as the power systems, and the world building is great, but there is one only problem..... the language you used is not easy to understand. Well i understand it pretty well, but if you want to reach the heart of many people, you can use simpler terms in your narration.