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Writing quality is amazing and though he will never correct anything he generally won't have to.Story Development is okay. Certain things I question (Ashly being one of them.) While others are quite well done (Emma and sky.)Character design. Lemme just say. Ashly makes me want to have her grow some balls so I can put them under a hydraulic press. Everyone else is well done. Although mc can feel a little bland sometimes. The actual designs are cool such as water hair in the newer chps.Updates come pretty fast. This might be my last post here if I can't keep up.World is still in need of building. But it feels a little bland and mundane. Nothing super new here.Overall a good novel. World building is a bit weak but the characters are compelling. **** Ashly though.

@chapter 43. So far so good. If you can oerlook some grammatical errors, then this one is for you. My only concern is there is still no Lemon scene lol. He already met a succubus and a hot witch and still no H Scene cmon Dude You said there will be and H scene

"Oh, that rogue Knucker. I've let it roam for a while because their species is endangered, a mistake on my part. But I've already dispatched Aldith, did you run across her by any chance?"

Happy looks around and says "Oh no did we get the wrong universe? Theres no fishes here!"

The world we are going to see is very much like us but science will be the magic and the will to move forward.

"Doctors didn't know what would happen to you. You've been asleep for nearly ten months! "he said emotionally