Cinta Masa Kecil

the novel is pretty good I recommend you guys read it

You can see the dedication and talent of the author when writing. I have just read XIETIAN's other novel and I can say that everything he writes always has a reason. Even the smallest word is important.If you want to read an interesting story, I certainly recommend this novel a lot.

It started off good, but the section of the book where the mc is on earth just seems to be a copy of solo leveling.

The story is good so far. The writing is smooth. The MC is too serious for his age but I think it is acceptable because he is self-conscious about his economic state. I think writing from the first person POV is limiting because it is hard to describe what the other party is thinking when you are not inside their heads but you seem to find a way to do it. good luck and good continuation.

Good plot. The suspenseful reveal of the characters was very engaging.  I wish to read more, hence I am very excited. More power to the author. Greater inspiration!

This book REALLY needs someone more fluent in English proofing it. Great concept for the book, but the language makes it very difficult to continue reading.