Cinderella Idol

I love this story you always leave me with more desire to continue reading it.Good story and good sex.............................................

I ate a bag of Doritos while writing this.                                                                                                                                                    N b.         

This story has my heart 10 out of 10! I sincerely hope that this book passes. It may not be to everyone's liking but I love these types of books best!

Not very well written, the novel is very simplistic that it's pretty terrible. There's only two sides in this story from what I have read so far(20+) there's the main character side and the antagonist side. The antagonists side is very boring and underdeveloped where they hate the main character because the antagonists are small minded. I do not recommend reading this if you want actually depth to your story or a good plot.

Woah! I just came here for a review swap, didn't think I'd be interested!Firstly, as an author, I like your writing style alot! It's more detailed than I can ever be.Just a tiny flaw, your sentences are slightly off, structure wise, but it's getting better!Also, this is my favorite genre, so I'm adding this to my library! Thanks!

So I've read some of it, and this guy need a proof reader or an editor to fix the glaring text errors, the him/her and I/them/you are just a couple of the most obvious examples where the authors meaning in describing the who/what/how situation is happening is confusing and/or contradictory to what the author intended?If those errors can be fixed then this may be a decent story, until then it feels like a somewhat machine translated story ?