Between Two Loves - Reviews

After my shower I took my mask off and went to bed.

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

' Chis-wo-mi-da ' : ' I'm sorry ' - Y/N Said fear.

This technique isn't really all in powering it basically used profound energy around me and infuses it with my body and soul to make it easer latter on to use and captivate along with making my body strong enough to not become sick and have better control, for the soul it basically makes it easier to focus and think.

This is a very promising story, keenly following it to see how it develops ?

For the FPs. Interesting start. I might just finish this one.

reward .                               .

This book tells more of African juju of which, u can't wait for more updates, author...

Waiting for for the real kick.…entertaining reads with lil relatable characters and fast-paced plot

I love this book! So far, the MC is so well written, and the intro really got me hooked. I recommend this book to any fantasy lovers! :)

Just gonna drop some info, okay. HSK has a discord server you can join, it's where I post art of the official Manga. You can discuss with me what the lore is or anything related like addressing how bad my grammar is ?. I'm sorry in advance English is my 5th language.

It sounds interesting man! But at chapter 1 I got 2 points: Too much stuttering? and also mixing up the tenses, but that is not something necessarily bad. To me some just some of the sentences sound weird. Also it might be a bit confusing, but I guess that’ll solve itself when you continue the story.As a starting author myself, I must say that the story’s got potential man, so keep writing.