Badass Shop and the Nerd Owner

I’m gonna do this without spoilers so sorry if I don’t put in enough detail. Honestly I love this novel so much. I like the mc and in my opinion the female main character is done very well and I actually like her. Plus she’s also useful unlike some other female characters... *cough* *cough* *Sakura* anyways if I had to gripe about one thing it would be the update pace but honestly even then I’ve seen much worse. We get a chapter once every 2 or 3 days which isn’t bad. Overall you should give this novel a chance as overall I think it’s a good read.

Well interesting story overall good/amazing job to the author.Warning it's mostly a open relationship so not for everyone I personally don't like it too much.Especially in one of the last chapters where we learn that Nora see other guys. That truly puts me off I was mostly okay with the few who where clearly open (mira/tsuru..) but that was quite bad (I talk only due to my preference, that completely make sens in the story)I have a little question for the author will the Mc be able to truly form his harem, close the open relationship Nora for exemple (even if there his some Yuri Tha persist ex Mira tsuru). That would help me decide if I continue due to me hating ntr (I know it's not but too close for me)

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Your English is good but the crafting is not on the level, I reckon you study a few like viewpoint, Show not tell, and do mind to keep an eye for the little things that may not seem important as it sometimes sets off the readers.Your main problem I notice reading the first three chapter is that the viewpoint is wrong. it's much like an omniscient telling a story he knows everything about. You should change that to 1st or 3rd person omniscient.and Show don't tell, all the aspiring author get through this, I myself was an example.   I fixed this problem through revising as I'm not still good enough to follow.that's all my personal thoughts reading the first 3 chapters. Good Day.

Hi, Crow here... so I wanted to thank you for reading my story and if you like it (or not), feel free to post a review criticizing whatever needs to be criticized or post your honest opinion about the characters, plot (if it exists) and so on.Again, thanks for reading!

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