And life goes on..!

I am in love so far and I hope to see more in the future.....................................................................................

I am only 10 chapters in and i am typically more harsh with my reviews, but i think this novel deserves 5 stars. the grammar and flow could use a little work up until this point, but that can only be expected from a first time writer. The plot is really interesting so far and looks promising, and im really shocked that this novel isnt more popular, and cause there are no “real” reviews, i decided to write one despite not catching up on chapters.

Instead of choosing to return to his apartment, he decided to expand his pocket world and add a living quarter. When he arrived he walked out the door of his computer room he arrived to one of the doors that lets him choose what the room will hold.

"Gah!...no!"

"My father gave it to me as a gift yesterday," Amirah replies, her face buried in a book with a peculiar cover. She absentmindedly pats the sleeping dog on her lap. "His name's Pakkun Jr."

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming