Amusement Park

Well from what I have read this novel keeps you in the dark most of the time. And I swear the Mc has multiple personalities from the way he acts. He mercies an opponent in an arena and in the exact next paragraph he says that that he will not give mercy as it’s a death game, and again after he says that he tells the opponent to give up. The way the author implements humour is excruciating, he would be threatening someone and the next second he’s getting smacked in the head like a comedy skit. The story progresses pretty fast and the world building lacks considerably compared to it creating situations where a person would be introduced as the relative of your arch enemy, but we don’t know who that arch enemy is. The switch in moods makes it so readers have a hard time imagining the mood and frankly it irritates me. We are not even given the technology level of the world and what we have to do is put bits and pieces together to make up one. there are too many times things just don’t add up, and in the end contradicts eachother.

Neat i need more and more and soon and can u make it more daring like acting ****** but like a definite dragon if prevoked and hidden god blood line or something u guess,,,as the attitude of sect master of glory sect yeah a savage dragon who destroyes countries in a single swipe ??????

This books deserves more than 5 stars.Thanks for your work friend.

The first realistic book. I love the plot. The description is too lit. Writer gimme half of ur writing power. My eyes were swelling I had to keep my mobile off.But novel hook me from the start.A must read novel worth reading.Hey you,yes you aspirant reader. Grab your popcorn nd enjoy story.

Travel is interesting, to learn about new places, new cultures, traditions and thin places. Although if you do not live in the country yourself, at least for half a year, the ordinary life of a citizen or villager, you will not understand the mentality and how people live and breathe in the country. Since when a foreigner lives as a tourist, he looks at a different country ... for tourists, this is a kind of "from the waiting room" and not a look of the country itself.When you live, walk on foot, visit ordinary and not tourist markets, communicate with various members of society, you better begin to understand the country and its culture.Something like this))

I hope you don't write your though in the story.. there is creator Though in end of Chapter, so the reader didnt pay for something that not for story