Akatsuki System in Another World

The story suffers from the same flaws as most chinese webnovels: low quality writing/editing, unoriginality, unnecessary monologues and info dumps. The same character tropes like in A LOT of other stories fx: The fat 'funny' friend, and the beautiful and strong (possible) love interest. The story also suffers from 'dragging on the story to meet word count'-syndrome.                                                        Thanks to obsoletefactor for review.

absolutely amazing novel and the aristocrats are getting slapped in the face. the girls are interesting to say the least and the concept of literally forging maidens is is of the charts of ideas.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------great novel, this is already one of my favorite novel, hope you don´t drop it, and keep the hard word-----------------------------------------------------------------------------

In today's episode, an interesting story and plot are overwhelmed by bad grammar. Really bad. As in "I'm fairly sure English isn't a first language for either the writer or the editor" bad. Now I only made it to chapter 4, but that's all I'm willing to slog through.

Wow, you got me, this us great and irresistible . Am so glad I came across this book. keep wiritng and update often. This is great and you are good. ??

I like the personality of the mc (not caring about anything but cultivation)??????????????????