Agapanthus: The One Who Never Found Love

I’m fully aware that as the story only has 18 reviews as of now, I’m bombing the review score. But at the same time, this story deserves nowhere near as much support as it seems to be getting. The concept is great and I love it, but the execution the author used is terrible. And yes, it’s the author’s first time writing but... that’s not an excuse to just ignore what readers are trying to say. In fact. The author is blatantly disregarding all the comments about the typos and spelling mistakes, or the story’s absolutely terrible grammar. Which, by the way, the story is littered with. Sorry, but I can’t support this train wreck. But here’s a promise, I’ll come back and fully support the novel of the author gets the story back together. Likely quite a few chapters need fully rewriting to make the grammar readable but trust me author... it’s well worth the cost. Props to the author for choosing to write, though.

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Its an amazing story with some simple flaws. The setting is similar to ”The Legendary Mechanic” but in a cultivation world. Mc is a npc in a world where players are soon joining. Spoilers ahead: The first flaw in the book is the time discrepancy. The cultivation world and earth have a 5:1 time ratio, yet mc somehow uses a store you can use once every month twice in less than 10 days. Similarly, when one of the players are brought up they are always shown to be streaming without taking into account the time difference between worlds. Finally some glaring huge problem is the fact that mc never tries to study his occupations: Poison Maker and Alchemy. One of the mc villain skills lets him get sort of an aura the more death he has on his hands wether directly or indirectly, and making poison and selling them is an easy way to get a huge body count, but it’s not even considered.

i do like stories like this but I'm having to read and try to figure out what things say. i suggest the author take their time and proofread more

kind of cool since I love cultivator genres. overall, the novel is good. a good read, and quiet entertaining. highly recommended to anyone who loves these kinds of novels.

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