The novel is very well written, pretty much perfect in my opinion. The plot is flawed though, with several things that just don't make sense.without going into much detail, these flawed plot points are usually underestimations of risk. A character will make a move that is described as full-proof and smart but if you were to look a bit closer, it's simply not.It also suffers from what I'd like to call "OP Character takes risk for no reason" where the mc will take large risks despite not getting much from it.Despite these negatives, the novel is still pretty good. The world is very cool and innovative, the cultivation system is also really cool and the characters are rather fleshed out.Good luck with the rest of the novel :)3.8 Stars
