A bit of a rocky start, but overall very good. It has some problems with pacing clarity about the capabilities of the mc, but those get cleared up with time.
I don't think it's right to talk about God or religion that way I think it's blasphemy so I don't advice to read this work and I hope for the author to delete it
There is some interesting things but at most mediocre character design, bland world background. Has no interesting and somewhat robotic character development. It has some potential if you are bored out of your mind. But I would say pass.
