Ok, the story has a good premise, ok background and meh characters so far, but a MAJOR problem is how the author implements the mc’s growth, he makes the mc seem useless stupid so he can learn new stuff, yes it is a good way of doing stuff but why do you have to make the mc so stupid instead of making a harder challenge. So far the mc is deemed a ‘genius’ but he’s retarded in every aspect, he doesn’t even use his past life knowledge to it’s worth. Might as well have the mc be a thinker instead. It becomes more noticeably the more the story goes on. The mc only uses the logic and equations and some random ideas from his past life. And I know the author doesn’t want to have the mc to be OP but that doesn’t mean the mc has to be retarded, you know give him less power rather than make him stupid. Oh and the grammar is terribly, he some how messes up the important words but get the filler words almost perfect... like he is trying to annoy the readers.Welp, best of luck readers to this book.
