A Brother's Regret

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I originally created an account specifically because this story, I just hadn't been able to formulate a proper comment since that time.

I originally wanted to be since and fair when talking about this story... but I can't. The longer I've waited to write this, the more my disdain for this story has grown, to the point I'm making this comment now in hopes of it still being somewhat based on the story's own merit and not my own disdain.

Disclaimer, I stopped reading at Chapter 943, take this review with a grain of salt. I'll also avoid specifics, keeping this relatively vague.

The world building is messy.
The system itself is filled with so many glaring contradiction that, at many points, it feels as if the author forgot previously established knowledge.
The main character is hollow, relying on plot armor so think, you'd be forgiven for mistaking it for his skull.
The side character are a mixed bag, some are good, some are awful.
Worst of all, in my opinion, are the awful plot twists.

There’s no ss on this site?

Last chapter will be November 13th! Chapter 45 will have a 3 part ending.

The title is catchy. I'm sure people won't regret reading it. Keep up the good work!

This book started out well but at this point the main character rapidly declined and is annoyingly whiny and that’s the main plot.