1959: With an Achievement System in Hand, She Stirred Things Up.

Man. I did try to read this, but this story and its MC are so dumb that i couldn't even pass the 3º chapter.To me, the worst part is the suicide tendencies of the MC. How he was so happy to exchange 20 years of his life with the ability to do some fancy punches. We all know that later there will be all kind of plot armor that will let him recover his lost life and even live uncountable years, but even so...In conclusion: This is a dumb story made by a dumb author for dumb readers. I wish them an happy and long relation.

Good story. I like it )))                                                                                                                                                   

Very good novel. It is an enjoyable and honest reading without any pretention. Similar to other cultivation works, the author amazingly made it his. With originality in his style and the delivery of the contents. It keeps getting better with time like a fine wine. There is no filling unlike many novel up there, each word has it purpose. At the end of a chapter, instead of being like : "That's it ? But what just happened ? The MC just moved one foot and that's all ?

the story is good so far and I love the little bits of comedy that pop up throughout so so far if say it's a great read for a cultivation novel

Having written over 100k+ words, I can tell you that this novel is kinda slow paced. You might feel like things are happening randomly at that point.The pace does go up a bit after around 50 chapters but it's kinda slow before that. Anyways, have fun reading!

This is a very interesting story.The story line and the plot are so great. To all her future reader, this story is so amazing.I hope you will support this master piece.Good job to the writer.Please update more..waiting for the next chapter of the story.